Monday, June 6, 2011

Final Blog Entry My Project

IS walmart good for america written by Hendrick smith and produce by Rick Young which is found on Frontline on November 16 ,2004..    . is walmart good for america in some aspect it is with all the low prices they offer but behind every good sitution there is so bad it puts a lot of company out of work and they where force to close down because of cheaper labour.
 Is walmart good for the united state .thats the question ask more frequenly by people all over .hence working in a walmart store does not pay the bill unless you work almost double your forty hour which is a lot of hour nto put in on a daily basic.working in a walmart store has it advantage and it diadvantage .you get things for a cheaper price but the pay doent meet the bill. walmart is popping up all over the country .Thus forcing a lot of small business to close down . small business do not have the big empire like walmart they dont have the man power and money to challege walmart so they are always force to close down .THUS leaving a lot of people out of work .
I remember when I use to work in a beauty salon . the pay was extremely great ,I could cover all my bills in the second week of the month .thus leaving me with two some times three weeks pay to saves .However ,over the years things started getting bad because the chinese started bringing in a lot of  diffrent types of hair pieces and wigs into the country thus making business get bad for us the little people and forcing us to close down because we started losing a lot of our customer to them.
 However having a walmart to some people is a good thing because they sell thing to match consumer pocket .But people is forgetting the big picture here .having a store selling things people can afford is good but on the other hand not having a job is bad . walmart is the biggest empire in  the united state of america it is so powerful that every states it land in all the small store started going out of business and leaving a lot of people out of work which in turn is bad for the  economic .My reason for saying that is because when people looses thier job they have to relied on umemployment thus putting pressure on a already weak economic ,and forcing price increase on consum
  Having a walmart in every state is what RAY Bracy  the VP of walmart wanted to accomplish in the early future but is the people of the stated going to stand by and let this global empire ruin our country .
walmart has dont more bad than good for the people of the united state .They take their business to China and Asia where they can get labour there for fifty cents on hour and one hundred a month compare to the fifteen to sixteen dollar they have to pay in the united states of america . In china they are store and factory all over the place over one point billion chinese in employ working at a cheaper rate than in america for the global empire walmart who in ture bring back the goods to the united states and sell for a cheaper price  thus forcing worker in the united states to work for minimum wage.
  Walmart exporting started in 1990, when president Bill Clinton sign the paper for the  trading to being they didnt know that so many people would be out of work thus depending on the already falling economic. business all over the country is closing because of the trading between china and america but mainly the small people are felling it like Rubbermaid this company was doing so good until walmart refuse to pay the increase price for goods thus forcing them to go out of business, thomsom is hanging on by a thread because walmart comes in with their mass production televion
  IT all comes down to us the people is walmart good for america .

Final Blog Entry My Project

THE topic of the flim I choose is walmart good for america in this flim it like watching the meatrix and matrix together its all about power and in the series title is walmart good for america . walmart owns the power and they are taking over the world little by little .

Saturday, May 28, 2011

blog21 Reflection

My best three work in the class is the food Industry,the matrix and the meatrix.The reason why I choose those topic Is because,they all respond to the same thing .Food and how they try to control us .
 Yes ,It is differentfrom my other writing experience. Because ,it let me share my work on line for my classmate and other class to comment on my work.
  Writing blog did help me improve my writing ability. The reason why writing blog help me improve my writing ability is because when my work is comment on .it give me a chance to correct my mistake .
YEe computS I did
 Sometimes
 Only when assign
The lesson I will be taking away from the class is how to write a paper that demostrate all the quality in passing the catw.
 I think you cover all the ground that We  needed to pass the catw. But, the part I learn from more is the final class before the catw when you told us to respond to the essay ,then do it in group . then share it with the class on the board .
 I do feel I am learning to write essay with basic understsanding of writing strategy. because ,you cover all the ground to writing a passing paper.
 My most memorable momrntin the class is watching the matrix and responding to it .The reasonfor this is because I was never interesting in watching that movie . But , when you gave it to us as on assigment I did not have a chose. but i them enjoy it .
 I would say to them take your class. because if you dont no how to use the computer by the end of the class you will master it and you will learn different technique in doing essays.
The food industry, the matrix and the meatrix . The reason why , the topic reflect my best work is because all of them is similar and it was not difficult in writing about them .

Tuesday, May 10, 2011

Blog16

According to the written article title ''young black kids the preferable of  fat eating'' by Greg Critser.Fast food restaurant is the topic of most dietitions and nutritionists list today. and it is the people of mainly african american who eat a lot of fast food more than any other ethnic group .therefore, parent need to   know what their kids or eating and try to prepare better meal for their kids for a better and healthy living .
 Hence african american kids from inner- city communities has a highter purchase rate of junk food . with sales hitting the roof for the past twenty years in the inner-city communities the mcdonald  rate has increase tremendously by supersizing their meals more than that of the white neibourhood
 The african american kids most likely walk to school so they are the target of the advertisement and sign .while the more ethnic kid are driven to school so they are not target .also, the consumer  find ways to make inner city kids bye more junk by asking ,''do you want to supersize for an extra seventy -nine cents "' now to the kids that a deal more food for less money they think even when they know they can not eat it all .
   Need less to say ,the calories has increase rapidly over a period of time it move from a rapid 680 to almost 1340.according to diet guideline fifty percent of teenager has manover it .needless to say all fast food on the market lack the proper nutrients. In fact it is the poor and their increasing need for cheap meals consumed outside the home that fueled the development

Monday, May 9, 2011

blog 13

WHEN watching the matrix you wonder whether it is fact or fiction .because of how the actor protrate the character and what they go through that makesyou relate to them .
H ence naming the character in the flim is a important part of it names like 'neo'means the one, and' tank' who never left the ship and mouse look just like one
 whatneo goes throught seems sometimes like it real  because things like that is happening now in the real world also thingshe go through like the pain of having to endure all those test and having is mouth close where he wouldnt speak
however tank job is also important too becausr he is the one who is responsible for

Tuesday, May 3, 2011

blog15 THe food industry

 THE meat packing Industry in the meatrix is consider one of the most dangerous and unsanitary place to be in .working in the meat packing industry is one of the most dangerous job in the USA ,but ,yet one of the most under pay industry.
    The reason why it is one of the most dangerous job is because each and every one has a weapon or two working with to kill the animals .
 The meat industry is done poorly because of the vast production. working has to put out to make a living .they mutilate the animal without cleaning them properly.
  firstly,eating meat from those factory is very unhealty my reason for stating that is because in oder for the worker to make their production they dont spent the time to properly tent to the cleaning of the meat .hence that make it unsanitary.
Secondly, the way how they grow their animal is also harmful to us because of what they fed them .most of all it is dangerous to our unborn and young children .
  However, workimg in the meat industry a lot of time make you eat less meat because of the condition of how the meat is been done .It is good to pratice eating healthy because of all those diseases around

Sunday, May 1, 2011

blog14 the meatrix verses the matrix

In the series title the meatrix ,the produrer copy the matrix in almost every episode . watching the meatrix is like watching the matrix but in animated verion.
   Also in the matrix the taking of the pills red or blue is the same in the meatrix , the name of the person who gave neo the pill was morpheus in the matrie also, the name of the animal is moorpheus.In the series meatrix it is base on farmer and how things use to be , when things was different people living on the farm use to be happy farming thier land and milking their cows now , machine as taken over and the animal are not happy they have to be subjected to machine milking them and pack closely in a tiny surrounding which makes it imposible for them to even turn .
   Taking the pills gave them a chance to look back at life how it use to be to make life better for them .being in the meatrix is a unhealty they feed all kind of things to the cow . so, that makes the meat contaminated when they are butcher and causes disease to humans .

Monday, April 25, 2011

blog12 reflection

According to the written piece , reflection and evaluation of eng 099 . for me doing this class has been a challenge for me .my reason for saying that is because i am not used to using the computer so it made me feel left out of many thing in class participation. however, during my time in this class i have learned how to use the computer and be more moderize with today society.
     Being in eng099 has been more that a milestone for me both in the class and in my daily life , using the computer has been so inspiratioal for , i felt more self sufficent and not afraid to excel..doing essay has been such a challenge for me but i see in which i have improve also i have started to use my transitional words to connect my sentence and started to put my sentence in paragraph which i never use ti do .
   Hence being in eng o99 has helped me to write a more organize statement when at my job i can now dress my sentence up to standard that even I am proud of myself and how far i have come in writing , i still have a lot more to learn but i am willing to take that step in actriving it .Also, in eng099 it a different approach from the class that i did before .my reason for saying that is because watching those movie them writing about them
is a brilliant way to write a essay you watch the movie them write what you watch to see if you understand what you watch .
 For Instance , i remember when we where told to watch to watch the matrix and aswear a couple of question. i try to answear them without watching the movie so you know what happen , yes , i was making  a fool of myself because you cant answear the question without watching the movie way to go professor getting me to sit down watching a movie without sleeping because thats how i do it .so you see being in this class has made me adjust myself to doing what i am told and doing it to the best of my ability.
    however the things i realy need help in is when i am writing a essay some times i cant come up with things to put on the paper i will read the written passage but when it comes times for me to summarize it thats where the problem is for me so i need to focus more on mastering that part of the problem.
   now, i know i have to pratice my grammar ,vocabulary which i am now doing. i now use my dictionary like i have never use before i try to look for the meaning of every new words i come across , i also try to place my words better when i am writing a sentense.

Tuesday, April 12, 2011

blog11

 According tothe article written by ''Timothy Sexton" reality television is taken over the mind of the younger generation .younger of all age has got themselve glue to reality television hence, reality television has find ways to pull youngster in by promote things to attract them like games they like or ways in which they can win money.many business place are losing out  and closing down because of the way the producer set up the system its a competitive world.
  Firstly, reality television is marketing a image that with curtain standard you cant succeed in this world of competition.hence to be a good singer you dont even have to know how to sing just by how you look.
and by the way you make the audiance feel because without rating television is nothing .
 Secondly,reality television  send a bad message to youngster of today ,it protrate education has not being important in our society hence, they want you to believe that you dont need education to make it that making yourself  amuseing and being funny can make you rich you dont need college to be a big success .
Meanwhile, youngster of today society dont want to be bother with school so the maker of reality television no how to pull them in and know what will happen when youngster are not educate it will soon be a dump world .
 As the writter says in the article,'' after  all , who would tune in week after week to watch a boring contest thats so true people from all over hurry home to watch these shows leave pot on fire just to give there full attention to the show for example my girlfriend is a game show freak their is no show on television she dont watch , she has a television in every room of her house    
i am not finish

blog10

I totally agree with the written article that we are all part of a system like machine living here in this country of tecnology however,not everyone is involve with tecnology . my reason for saying that is because not all people is about tecnology a lot of elder people dont get familarize with tecnology so when they say we are all machine i think it mostly people of a younger generation.

Friday, March 25, 2011

blogs 6 THE ALLEGORY OF THE CAVE

 According to the story,the allegory of the cave written in 360 B.C.E and transtated by 'BENJAMIN JOWELL" SOCRATESwas consider to be a very wise man and a great philosopher is  student PLATO give a brief flim of the cave. hence, the prisoner who was confind to the cave was chain to the walls they were their on their kneels facing the wall looking as the shawdow passes by day after day they couldnt reconize the shawdow to know weither  it male or female .however when a prisoner is free and he is out in the sun and see people walking and how beautiful it looks ,he wanted to tell is friend how beautifull outside was but is friend couldnt not reconize their own friend he was likr anyone else passing by .therefore, the man was discourage and wanted to go back with is friend.

Thursday, March 24, 2011

blog 6

blog7 REFLEXION AND EVALUATION

  I THINK I HAVE IMPROVE a litte with doing essay .however, i need to work more on understanding clearly and follow what the author ask me to do.hence, I am still having problem with summarising eassay.the cat w was a good execise for me it helps me to pratise my writting skill. and timing zone.

Thursday, March 17, 2011

BLOG4 THE POLUTION OF INFORMERCIAL

   ACCORDING to the written ARTICLE HYPE ,WRITTEN BY KALLE LASN'',advertisment is every where you go from the moment you woke in the morning till you go to bed at night also, commercial is a hand going thing its involve our daily routine getting breakfast dinner or lunch it ad for you to chose from leaving the house their is ad on the step of the apartment to get to the bus or train to work .  
    However,commercial is part of society because it is a profitable business and it also direct your part if you are going on a trip they are million of billboard on your way to where every you are going if a new electroni comes out on the market you dont have to watch it on television any more you will pass it on the high way on your way home or to your next distination .   HOWEVER,in the past billboads use to be only some place but now advertisement has taken over the universe .
     on the other hand ,going to get money no longer reguire a long jary line you just go to the machine and the promotion is their to guide you .coming and going anywhere in the country is getting much easier because of billboard , poster and promotion. meanwhile in the schools their are so many poster with what what food to buy from what not to buy ,even when you are not hungry just seeing some of the poster makes you want to try some .
    AT THE SAME TIME ,they have children doing commercial to attrat other children .advertisment are on junk and vegetable their is no escaping it .   aS WRITTEN I N THE PASSAGE ,"you fill Your car with gas and their an ad on the the nozzle ''. I REMEMBER a while back i  pull into a gas station to purchase some gas i normally pay at the window or the gas station attendant but this particular gas  station was different it was like going to a ''mc donald or   wendy restaurant '' you drive up to the pump and it ask you question .i was so surprise about every thing that i took my phone and record it because i dont think no one would believe the world has gone to promotion .
   IN CONCLUSION ,PROmotion    plays a very big role in our society today ,they are every where you go there is no escaping them.    

Monday, March 14, 2011

apple: blog 1 THE TITLE OF THE ARTICLE IS MASS MEDIA POLL...

apple: blog 1 THE TITLE OF THE ARTICLE IS MASS MEDIA POLL...: "according to the written passage, the media is every where you go from you wake in the morning until you go to bed at night .also , going th..."

Thursday, March 10, 2011

BLOG 2

Discusing annotation with the class I learn a lot I  always just read through my essay and started writing now I learn a different                                                                                                                                             way  . .                                                                                                                                                                       

Tuesday, March 8, 2011

blog 1 THE TITLE OF THE ARTICLE IS MASS MEDIA POLLUTION

ACCORDING to the written passage ,billboard,ads an commercial are taking over the world .ITS every where we go in our sleep in our jobs taking the train or bus to work its all over.however, their are million of ads all over on the television on the radio thats it imposible to get away from