My best three work in the class is the food Industry,the matrix and the meatrix.The reason why I choose those topic Is because,they all respond to the same thing .Food and how they try to control us .
Yes ,It is differentfrom my other writing experience. Because ,it let me share my work on line for my classmate and other class to comment on my work.
Writing blog did help me improve my writing ability. The reason why writing blog help me improve my writing ability is because when my work is comment on .it give me a chance to correct my mistake .
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The lesson I will be taking away from the class is how to write a paper that demostrate all the quality in passing the catw.
I think you cover all the ground that We needed to pass the catw. But, the part I learn from more is the final class before the catw when you told us to respond to the essay ,then do it in group . then share it with the class on the board .
I do feel I am learning to write essay with basic understsanding of writing strategy. because ,you cover all the ground to writing a passing paper.
My most memorable momrntin the class is watching the matrix and responding to it .The reasonfor this is because I was never interesting in watching that movie . But , when you gave it to us as on assigment I did not have a chose. but i them enjoy it .
I would say to them take your class. because if you dont no how to use the computer by the end of the class you will master it and you will learn different technique in doing essays.
The food industry, the matrix and the meatrix . The reason why , the topic reflect my best work is because all of them is similar and it was not difficult in writing about them .
Saturday, May 28, 2011
Tuesday, May 10, 2011
Blog16
According to the written article title ''young black kids the preferable of fat eating'' by Greg Critser.Fast food restaurant is the topic of most dietitions and nutritionists list today. and it is the people of mainly african american who eat a lot of fast food more than any other ethnic group .therefore, parent need to know what their kids or eating and try to prepare better meal for their kids for a better and healthy living .
Hence african american kids from inner- city communities has a highter purchase rate of junk food . with sales hitting the roof for the past twenty years in the inner-city communities the mcdonald rate has increase tremendously by supersizing their meals more than that of the white neibourhood
The african american kids most likely walk to school so they are the target of the advertisement and sign .while the more ethnic kid are driven to school so they are not target .also, the consumer find ways to make inner city kids bye more junk by asking ,''do you want to supersize for an extra seventy -nine cents "' now to the kids that a deal more food for less money they think even when they know they can not eat it all .
Need less to say ,the calories has increase rapidly over a period of time it move from a rapid 680 to almost 1340.according to diet guideline fifty percent of teenager has manover it .needless to say all fast food on the market lack the proper nutrients. In fact it is the poor and their increasing need for cheap meals consumed outside the home that fueled the development
Hence african american kids from inner- city communities has a highter purchase rate of junk food . with sales hitting the roof for the past twenty years in the inner-city communities the mcdonald rate has increase tremendously by supersizing their meals more than that of the white neibourhood
The african american kids most likely walk to school so they are the target of the advertisement and sign .while the more ethnic kid are driven to school so they are not target .also, the consumer find ways to make inner city kids bye more junk by asking ,''do you want to supersize for an extra seventy -nine cents "' now to the kids that a deal more food for less money they think even when they know they can not eat it all .
Need less to say ,the calories has increase rapidly over a period of time it move from a rapid 680 to almost 1340.according to diet guideline fifty percent of teenager has manover it .needless to say all fast food on the market lack the proper nutrients. In fact it is the poor and their increasing need for cheap meals consumed outside the home that fueled the development
Monday, May 9, 2011
blog 13
WHEN watching the matrix you wonder whether it is fact or fiction .because of how the actor protrate the character and what they go through that makesyou relate to them .
H ence naming the character in the flim is a important part of it names like 'neo'means the one, and' tank' who never left the ship and mouse look just like one
whatneo goes throught seems sometimes like it real because things like that is happening now in the real world also thingshe go through like the pain of having to endure all those test and having is mouth close where he wouldnt speak
however tank job is also important too becausr he is the one who is responsible for
H ence naming the character in the flim is a important part of it names like 'neo'means the one, and' tank' who never left the ship and mouse look just like one
whatneo goes throught seems sometimes like it real because things like that is happening now in the real world also thingshe go through like the pain of having to endure all those test and having is mouth close where he wouldnt speak
however tank job is also important too becausr he is the one who is responsible for
Tuesday, May 3, 2011
blog15 THe food industry
THE meat packing Industry in the meatrix is consider one of the most dangerous and unsanitary place to be in .working in the meat packing industry is one of the most dangerous job in the USA ,but ,yet one of the most under pay industry.
The reason why it is one of the most dangerous job is because each and every one has a weapon or two working with to kill the animals .
The meat industry is done poorly because of the vast production. working has to put out to make a living .they mutilate the animal without cleaning them properly.
firstly,eating meat from those factory is very unhealty my reason for stating that is because in oder for the worker to make their production they dont spent the time to properly tent to the cleaning of the meat .hence that make it unsanitary.
Secondly, the way how they grow their animal is also harmful to us because of what they fed them .most of all it is dangerous to our unborn and young children .
However, workimg in the meat industry a lot of time make you eat less meat because of the condition of how the meat is been done .It is good to pratice eating healthy because of all those diseases around
The reason why it is one of the most dangerous job is because each and every one has a weapon or two working with to kill the animals .
The meat industry is done poorly because of the vast production. working has to put out to make a living .they mutilate the animal without cleaning them properly.
firstly,eating meat from those factory is very unhealty my reason for stating that is because in oder for the worker to make their production they dont spent the time to properly tent to the cleaning of the meat .hence that make it unsanitary.
Secondly, the way how they grow their animal is also harmful to us because of what they fed them .most of all it is dangerous to our unborn and young children .
However, workimg in the meat industry a lot of time make you eat less meat because of the condition of how the meat is been done .It is good to pratice eating healthy because of all those diseases around
Sunday, May 1, 2011
blog14 the meatrix verses the matrix
In the series title the meatrix ,the produrer copy the matrix in almost every episode . watching the meatrix is like watching the matrix but in animated verion.
Also in the matrix the taking of the pills red or blue is the same in the meatrix , the name of the person who gave neo the pill was morpheus in the matrie also, the name of the animal is moorpheus.In the series meatrix it is base on farmer and how things use to be , when things was different people living on the farm use to be happy farming thier land and milking their cows now , machine as taken over and the animal are not happy they have to be subjected to machine milking them and pack closely in a tiny surrounding which makes it imposible for them to even turn .
Taking the pills gave them a chance to look back at life how it use to be to make life better for them .being in the meatrix is a unhealty they feed all kind of things to the cow . so, that makes the meat contaminated when they are butcher and causes disease to humans .
Also in the matrix the taking of the pills red or blue is the same in the meatrix , the name of the person who gave neo the pill was morpheus in the matrie also, the name of the animal is moorpheus.In the series meatrix it is base on farmer and how things use to be , when things was different people living on the farm use to be happy farming thier land and milking their cows now , machine as taken over and the animal are not happy they have to be subjected to machine milking them and pack closely in a tiny surrounding which makes it imposible for them to even turn .
Taking the pills gave them a chance to look back at life how it use to be to make life better for them .being in the meatrix is a unhealty they feed all kind of things to the cow . so, that makes the meat contaminated when they are butcher and causes disease to humans .
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